Thursday 3 April 2014

Feedback on peers presentations

Janoo Patel

I really enjoyed Janoo's presentation, I felt that her concept was well resolved and that she had responded to her clients brief successfully. Her final perspectives views and her physical model were constructed to a high quality which showed her design effectively and clearly.

Natalie Harris

I  was really interested in the outcome of Natalie's design, I thought that her physical model was well constructed, and her perspectives were evocative and gave a good sense of what it would be like to inhabit the space.

Rachel Baker

I thought that Rachels final outcome was very clever with the way she had extended beyond the confines of the room for her design. Her physical model was expertly constructed which gave a very good representation of the space. I really liked the way Rachel used materials in the space to give it feel,   for example with the black wall in the prayer space.

Xavier Ellah

Xaviers project was well resolved and presented beautifully. I especially liked the video walkthrough from cry engine, it explained the design well and gave a good representation of the space. I liked how Xavier used collage throughout his project through to his final drawings, it gave a consistent style to his work and looked really effective on the page. His final design really related back to the ritual which was good and overall a nice flowing presentation.

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